Monday, November 24, 2025

The Silence Of Wild Places

Mill Creek Campground, 
Northern California

After two days of driving,
feeling odd and out of sorts,
finally camping, I craved
to know the silence of wild places.

That afternoon I put my ear to the forest floor,
listening for the rumble of Creation
only to come face to face 
with a bright yellow five-inch banana slug,
shouting to all the world,
Here I am.

Its eye stalks moved right and left,
up and down, independent of one another.
Its lower tentacles sniffed for food,
scraped into its mouth by its toothy tongue.

Down here it seemed so much larger
(along with everything else),
a little creepy but not so menacing.
It wasn’t intimidated by whatever
light and shadow I resembled.
It moved silently and fearlessly
over the forest debris.

That night, while gazing
at the mass of the Milky Way,
I thought the one thing I would like
to see before I died would be a supernova.

Yet I was astonished that the most elegant
thing I saw that day was the banana slug
and the reservoir of silence 
that was the forest floor.


From: Memories And The Things Left Behind
Unpub. MS p. 16

1 comment:

  1. Love this poem. All living creatures can appear like giants and make us wonder our place in this vast universe. I hope you see a supernova one day.

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